Friday, March 4, 2011

Rewrote last night's post

I woke up this morning with the words from last night rolling around in my head. It was a lot easier to get what I wanted to say out today, so I rewrote most of what I posted last night. In the process I saw lots of errors (sorry for that). This is a better version of what was posted yesterday:


He was braced at her entrance, hesitating for one more second to ask, “Are you sure?” his thick head probing for her entrance. His body tensed, holding back for her approval.
Smiling, she bucked her hips until she felt him slide in a quarter of an inch. “Does that answer your question babe?” she teased, loving the play of candlelight on his firm muscles.
“God, I love you,” he panted before reaching down to capture her mouth in a rough kiss. “If I’m going too fast or hurting you just say so. I’ll stop, even if it kills me.”
Lexi could feel her muscles stretching to accommodate Logan’s cock as he gently pushed into her. Everyone told her the first time was painful and never any good, but she disagreed. The care Logan was taking to make sure he didn’t hurt her and the love reflecting in his eyes made this the best experience of her life.
A gentle nip at the underside of her breast brought Lexi back into the moment, all thoughts gone and her focus on the onslaught of sensations. Logan suckled her right nipple and thrust the rest of the way in. The feel of him buried to the hilt inside her sent a new wave of moisture between Lexi’s legs.
Logan began pumping in and out of Lexi and she matched each of his thrusts with one of her own. She could feel the pressure of an orgasm building, the peak getting closer with each second. Logan reached between them to flick her clit. Once, twice, and…
Just as she was about to tumble over the edge Lexi woke up, panting as if she was having sex.

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