Ugh!

I wrote a little more tonight, but I'm tempted to just hit the delete button on it all. The idea of what I want the beginning to be is there, but it feels choppy and impersonal. Well, here it is. Feedback would be greatly appreciated.

“Are you sure?” he asked, bracing himself over her, his thick head probing for her entrance.

She could see how difficult it was for him to hold back. After taking a moment to admire the candlelight dancing across his face, Lexi brought him down for a kiss. Shifting purposfully, she felt Logan slip in a quarter of an inch. “Does that answer your question babe?”

“God, I love you,” he panted before reaching down to capture her mouth in a kiss. “If I’m going too fast or hurting you just say so. I’ll stop, even if it kills me.”

Lexi could feel her muscles stretching to accommodate Logan’s cock as he gently pushed into her. Everyone told her the first time was painful and never any good, but Lexi disagreed. The care Logan was taking to make sure he didn’t hurt her and the love reflecting in his eyes made this the best experience of her life.

A gentle nip at the underside of her breast brought Lexi back into the moment, all thoughts gone and her focus on the onslaught of sensations. Ryan suckled her right nipple and thrust the rest of the way in. The feel of him buried to the hilt inside her sent a new wave of moisture between Lexi’s legs.

Logan began pumping in and out of Lexi and she matched each of her thrusts with one of her own. She could feel the pressure of an orgasm building, the peak getting closer with each second.

Just as she was about to tumble over the edge Lexi woke up, panting as if she was having sex.