Monday, November 8, 2010

The first of hopefully many...

This is my attempt at a blog. I figure daily writing will help me develop my writing and hopefully bring me one step closer to becoming a writer. I would like to write like Bella Andre, Jami Alden, & Delilah Devlin. They are three women who create stories that suck you in with romance, yet are erotic too. These women are powerful and completely confident in what they write. I hope to one day to have someone get lost in my story the way I have gotten lost in theirs.

I write more than just romance and here's something I wrote a few months ago. I'd appreciate it if you felt like giving me some feedback:

The house on the hill

The house on the hill is getting harder to see,
Through the cloud of fog it’s barely visible.
I’m no longer sure if it still sits there,
Or if the outline I see is my imagination.

Regardless of how fast I run,
How hard I push
The distance never lessens.
The house is just as far away today as every day before.

It used to be a bright and shiny beacon,
So warm and inviting,
Lit from within.

The dream of a happy home
And a true love
Once so sure
Now a distant dream.

One by one the lights have gone away,
Until nothing remains
But a remote outline
And dashed hopes...
And I’m not sure that’s even real.

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